Good Phrases for Primary 3 & 4 Composition

Good phrases for Primary 3 composition should help a young writer say something clearly, not make the story sound as if an adult wrote it. This guide gives Primary 3 and Primary 4 pupils 100 controllable composition phrases for openings, noticing, worry, action, dialogue, kindness, mistakes, relief, joy and reflection. Each phrase is short enough to understand, flexible enough to adapt, and useful enough to practise across more than one story.

Parents searching for good phrases for Primary 3 composition, Primary 4 composition phrases, creative writing phrases, show not tell phrases and composition vocabulary often find lists that are impressive but too difficult to own. The real target is productive vocabulary: language a child can explain, retrieve without looking, change for a new character or setting, and fit naturally into a complete paragraph.

The best phrase is therefore not the rarest one. It is the one the child can control. Start with five to ten phrases, learn what job each phrase performs, fence its meaning with situations where it does and does not fit, then move it into fresh stories. Use this page with the Singapore Vocabulary Guide and the eduKate Vocabulary Learning System for the wider route from word knowledge to independent writing.

Quick Read

Level: Primary 3 and Primary 4.
Goal: natural composition language that children can adapt independently.
Method: meaning → boundary → retrieval → adaptation → paragraph → transfer.
Do not memorise all 100 at once. Work in small sets.
A phrase is mastered only when the child can use it in a fresh story without copying the model.

The short answer

For Primary 3 and 4, useful composition phrases should stay close to the child’s natural speaking and reading level while adding precision. A child who can write “A small detail caught my eye” and then explain what the detail was has more control than a child who inserts an elaborate sentence whose meaning is only half understood.

100 phrases young writers can actually control

Opening calmly

1. The morning began with the soft hum of ordinary routines.

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2. For a while, nothing seemed different from any other day.

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3. Sunlight slipped across the floor as we packed our bags.

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4. The corridor buzzed with the familiar sounds of school.

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5. I expected a simple afternoon and had no reason to think otherwise.

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6. The day moved along so normally that I stopped paying attention.

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7. We chatted as we walked, unaware that the plan was about to change.

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8. Everything felt comfortably familiar at first.

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9. The first sign of trouble was small enough to ignore.

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10. I remember how ordinary the moment seemed before it changed.

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Noticing something

11. A small detail caught my eye.

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12. Something in the scene did not look quite right.

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13. I stopped when I noticed a movement near the gate.

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14. A strange sound made me turn around.

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15. One object seemed out of place.

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16. I looked again to make sure I had seen correctly.

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17. My attention shifted towards the quiet corner.

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18. The change was slight, but I could not ignore it.

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19. A quick glance became a longer look.

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20. I noticed the problem just before anyone spoke.

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Showing worry

21. A knot of worry formed in my stomach.

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22. My smile faded as I understood the problem.

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23. I tried to stay calm, but my thoughts raced ahead.

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24. My hands became suddenly cold.

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25. I swallowed and looked for an adult.

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26. The cheerful mood disappeared from the group.

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27. I could hear the nervousness in my own voice.

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28. For a moment, I did not know what to do.

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29. A worried silence fell between us.

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30. I took a slow breath and forced myself to think.

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Taking action

31. I moved quickly towards the nearest adult.

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32. We stopped arguing and focused on what needed to be done.

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33. I decided that waiting would only make things worse.

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34. I took one careful step forward.

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35. We divided the task and began at once.

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36. I pushed my fear aside and asked for help.

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37. I chose the safest option I could think of.

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38. There was no time for a perfect plan, so I started with the next sensible step.

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39. I explained the problem as clearly as I could.

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40. Together, we turned our worry into action.

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Dialogue and reaction

41. “Are you all right?” I asked, lowering my voice.

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42. “Let me explain,” I said before the misunderstanding grew.

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43. She stared at me for a second, then nodded slowly.

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44. His reply came out more sharply than he intended.

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45. I opened my mouth to answer, but no words came.

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46. “We should tell someone,” my friend whispered.

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47. Her face softened when she heard the full story.

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48. He looked away, suddenly embarrassed.

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49. “I think I made a mistake,” I admitted.

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50. The question hung between us for a moment.

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Kindness

51. She offered help before anyone had to ask.

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52. He waited patiently while the younger child found the words.

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53. A small act of kindness changed the mood of the group.

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54. I held the door and gave him time to steady himself.

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55. She listened without interrupting.

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56. We helped quietly instead of making a fuss.

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57. He shared what he had without expecting anything back.

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58. I noticed her discomfort and made space beside me.

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59. The simplest help turned out to be the most useful.

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60. Her gentle tone made the difficult moment easier.

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Mistake and guilt

61. I knew at once that the mistake was mine.

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62. The excuse sounded weak even to me.

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63. I wished I could take back what I had said.

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64. A heavy feeling of guilt settled over me.

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65. I stopped looking for someone else to blame.

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66. The truth was uncomfortable, but hiding it felt worse.

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67. I finally gathered the courage to admit what had happened.

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68. My careless choice had created a problem for someone else.

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69. Saying sorry was only the first step.

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70. I decided to repair what I could.

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Relief

71. I released a breath I had not realised I was holding.

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72. Relief washed over me when I saw that everyone was safe.

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73. My shoulders relaxed at last.

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74. The worried faces around me began to soften.

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75. A nervous laugh escaped before I could stop it.

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76. The problem was finally under control.

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77. The ordinary sounds around us felt welcome again.

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78. I smiled when the missing item was returned.

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79. For the first time, I could think clearly.

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80. The fear faded as quickly as it had arrived.

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Joy

81. A wide smile spread across her face.

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82. Excited voices filled the room.

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83. We exchanged a look of pure delight.

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84. The good news lifted everyone’s mood.

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85. I could hardly keep the happiness out of my voice.

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86. Our nervous waiting turned into laughter.

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87. The small success felt enormous after so much effort.

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88. We celebrated without forgetting the people who had helped us.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: We celebrated without forgetting the people who had helped us. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

89. My grin stayed with me all the way home.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: My grin stayed with me all the way home. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

90. The moment felt bright and unforgettable.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: The moment felt bright and unforgettable. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

Reflection and ending

91. I went home with a better understanding of responsibility.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: I went home with a better understanding of responsibility. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

92. The incident taught me to slow down before I judged.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: The incident taught me to slow down before I judged. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

93. I learnt that courage can begin with asking for help.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: I learnt that courage can begin with asking for help. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

94. From then on, I paid more attention to the people around me.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: From then on, I paid more attention to the people around me. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

95. The mistake stayed in my memory because it changed a habit.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: The mistake stayed in my memory because it changed a habit. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

96. I realised that kindness is often quiet.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: I realised that kindness is often quiet. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

97. The day ended normally, but I was no longer thinking in the same way.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: The day ended normally, but I was no longer thinking in the same way. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

98. I understood why honesty matters most when telling the truth is uncomfortable.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: I understood why honesty matters most when telling the truth is uncomfortable. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

99. The lesson became useful the next time I faced a similar choice.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: The lesson became useful the next time I faced a similar choice. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

100. As I walked away, I knew I would handle the situation differently in future.

Use it for the story job named above, then change one detail before using it. Explain the phrase in simpler words, name one situation where it would sound wrong, and write a fresh sentence. Model extension: As I walked away, I knew I would handle the situation differently in future. The next sentence should show what the character notices, decides or does because of that moment.

Why control matters more than difficulty

Primary 3 and 4 writers are still building sentence control, paragraph control and story sequence. If vocabulary becomes much more difficult than the child’s grammar, the writing starts to wobble. A phrase that is partly understood can create wrong prepositions, mixed tenses, strange collocations or an emotional intensity that does not match the event. Control keeps vocabulary connected to meaning.

Practise this idea by choosing three phrases from different groups above. Use each one in two contrasting settings. Then close the page and retrieve a new version from memory. The aim is not exact repetition; it is accurate reconstruction.

A useful check is to read the paragraph aloud. If the phrase sounds much more formal than every surrounding sentence, simplify it. If it repeats information the reader already knows, remove it. If it changes what the reader understands or helps the story move, keep it.

The five-question phrase test

Ask: What does it mean? What story job does it perform? How strong is the feeling? What words naturally come before and after it? Can you rewrite it for a different place? A child who can answer these questions is learning a language pattern rather than copying a decorative line.

How to use the Fencing Method

Build boundaries around each expression. “A knot of worry formed in my stomach” fits growing concern, but not every tiny inconvenience. “Relief washed over me” needs a real release from uncertainty. The fence makes a phrase safer because the child knows the edge of its meaning.

How to build a paragraph around one phrase

Write the cause before the phrase and the consequence after it. If the phrase says a detail caught the narrator’s eye, the previous sentence should establish the scene and the next sentence should reveal the detail. This simple cause–phrase–consequence structure prevents phrase dumping.

How to vary a phrase

Change first person to third person, present to past, school to home, friend to adult, calm worry to stronger worry. Preserve the meaning while changing the surface. Variation makes vocabulary flexible and reveals grammar weaknesses early.

How to revise without losing the child’s voice

Do not upgrade every common word. Keep simple verbs when they are exact. Replace only the words that are vague, repetitive or too weak for the scene. A child’s writing should become clearer and more precise, not older-sounding for its own sake.

How parents can help

Ask for explanation before correction. “What are you trying to show here?” often reveals whether the problem is vocabulary, story logic or grammar. Praise a natural sentence that fits the event. That reinforces judgement rather than ornament.

How teachers can diagnose misuse

If a phrase is forced, identify the underlying cause: meaning, intensity, register, collocation, grammar or story position. Give a contrastive example and ask the pupil to explain why one version fits better. The explanation builds an internal editor.

30 transfer drills

Drill 1: a classroom misunderstanding

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in a classroom misunderstanding. Then make the emotion milder. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 2: a lost item at a hawker centre

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in a lost item at a hawker centre. Then make the emotion stronger. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 3: a sudden rainstorm after school

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in a sudden rainstorm after school. Then change I to she or he. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 4: a disagreement between friends

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in a disagreement between friends. Then move the event from morning to evening. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 5: helping a younger child

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in helping a younger child. Then replace a friend with an adult. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 6: a family celebration

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in a family celebration. Then move the setting away from school. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 7: missing a bus

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in missing a bus. Then turn one sentence into dialogue plus action. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 8: finding an injured animal

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in finding an injured animal. Then remove one adjective and strengthen the verb. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 9: preparing for a school performance

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in preparing for a school performance. Then add one sensory detail. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 10: returning something that does not belong to you

Choose one phrase from the list and use it in returning something that does not belong to you. Then rewrite the same idea in simpler English. Close the page and rewrite the sentence once more from memory. Compare the versions for clarity, grammar, intensity and naturalness.

Drill 11: a classroom misunderstanding

Drill 12: a lost item at a hawker centre

Drill 13: a sudden rainstorm after school

Drill 14: a disagreement between friends

Drill 15: helping a younger child

Drill 16: a family celebration

Drill 17: missing a bus

Drill 18: finding an injured animal

Drill 19: preparing for a school performance

Drill 20: returning something that does not belong to you

Drill 21: a classroom misunderstanding

Drill 22: a lost item at a hawker centre

Drill 23: a sudden rainstorm after school

Drill 24: a disagreement between friends

Drill 25: helping a younger child

Drill 26: a family celebration

Drill 27: missing a bus

Drill 28: finding an injured animal

Drill 29: preparing for a school performance

Drill 30: returning something that does not belong to you

A four-week plan

Week 1

Openings, noticing and simple action. Learn no more than ten new phrases at a time. Retrieve them after a delay, use them in two different settings, then write one paragraph with the page closed. At the end of the week, keep only the phrases the child can explain and adapt confidently.

Week 2

Worry, dialogue and kindness. Learn no more than ten new phrases at a time. Retrieve them after a delay, use them in two different settings, then write one paragraph with the page closed. At the end of the week, keep only the phrases the child can explain and adapt confidently.

Week 3

Mistakes, guilt, relief and joy. Learn no more than ten new phrases at a time. Retrieve them after a delay, use them in two different settings, then write one paragraph with the page closed. At the end of the week, keep only the phrases the child can explain and adapt confidently.

Week 4

Reflection, mixed retrieval and new prompts. Learn no more than ten new phrases at a time. Retrieve them after a delay, use them in two different settings, then write one paragraph with the page closed. At the end of the week, keep only the phrases the child can explain and adapt confidently.

Frequently asked questions

Should my child memorise all 100 phrases?

No. Use the page as a reference bank. Work in small groups and revisit them through retrieval.

Can the phrases be copied exactly?

They can when they genuinely fit, but adaptation is better evidence of ownership.

What if a phrase feels too difficult?

Simplify it. Natural language the child controls is stronger than vocabulary they cannot explain.

How many phrases should appear in one composition?

There is no target number. Use only phrases that perform a real story job.

Is show-don’t-tell always better?

No. Direct telling is useful for quick transitions. Expand only the moments that deserve attention.

How do I stop repetitive emotion phrases?

Vary the evidence: voice, posture, attention, movement, decision, silence and thought.

What is the best revision method?

Short retrieval sessions across several days, followed by fresh writing contexts.

How do I know a phrase is mastered?

The child can explain it, adapt it, use it naturally and reject it when it does not fit.

Final principle

Good phrases for Primary 3 and 4 should slowly disappear into the child’s own writing. The reader should notice the story, not the phrase list behind it. Small sets, clear meanings, retrieval, variation and paragraph-level practice turn borrowed language into usable language.

Return to the Singapore Vocabulary Guide for neighbouring vocabulary routes and to the eduKate Vocabulary Learning System for long-term learning methods.

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Good Phrases for Primary 3 and 4 Composition: 100 Phrases Young Writers Can Control